Sunday, March 27, 2011

Brainstorming a Poem

Eric is an important person for me, he is my friend since 4th grade.
He is short, spiky, funny, loud, generous, competitive, dramatic, sporty, hyper,and goofy.
Eric is quite short with spiky hair.
He sometimes tries rapping rap songs that he liked.
He smells like the donut that he always eat after school.
His hair is spiky.
Laugh, Exercise, Rap, Compete, Chat

Eric, my best friend
Short with spiky hair
Funny, dramatic, and sometimes goofy
When you tries to rap, you always makes me laugh.
I could always smell the donut that you get from O'Fa.
The spiky-ness of your hair, just like touching a porcupine
with your bare hands.
We laugh, compete, chat, and exercise together
You are my best friend.

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